减少be动词的使用分析报告.pptVIP

减少be 动词的使用;be 动词; (1a) There is a beautiful park near my house. The name of the park is Tian Tan Park, which was built several hundred years ago. It is the biggest park in Beijing. The Tian-Tan Park is famous for not only its beauty but for its quietness. ;请比较： (1a) There is a beautiful park near my house. The name of the park is Tian Tan Park, which was built several hundred years ago. It is the biggest park in Beijing. The Tian-Tan Park is famous for not only its beauty but for its quietness. (1b) Near my house stands Tian-Tan, the biggest park in Beijing, built several hundred years ago and famous now for not only its beauty but also its quietness.;(2a) There are seven factors that contribute to this phenomenon./There are seven factors contributing to this phenomenon. (2b) Seven factors contribute to this phenomenon. (3a) On the river banks there are many willow trees with their branches bending into water. (3b) Many willow trees bend their branches into the river. (4a) It is a small mountain village surrounded by a clear river winding through a deep valley. (4b) A clear river surrounds a small mountain village and winds through a deep valley.;被动变主动;替换为词义相近的行为动词;系表结构变为动(宾)结构;(13a) In the front, it was a sharp slope of a cliff. (13b) The front cliff sloped sharply. (14a) Ecological imbalance is the biggest threat to the survival of wild animals and plants, even human beings. (14b) Ecological imbalance threatens the survival of wild animals and plants, even human beings. (15a) The dominant feature of Nanking is the Yangtze River Bridge. (15b) The Yangtze River Bridge dominates Nanking.;(16a) There is a river before my house. It is an east-to-west river and connected with the Yangtze River. It is not very long but deep. (16b) A river, not very long but deep, runs before my house from east to west and connects with the Yangtze.