獨立写作中间段的展开重点.pptxVIP

段落展开 中间段 评分标准3： using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications. 主体段展开 Topic Sentence 因果法/解释说明（Cause and Effect/Explanation） 例证法（Exemplification ） 反差法（Contrast） Summary 1. 必须是陈述句 Isn’t it better for us to choose a foreign university? I think it is better for us to choose a foreign university. Topic Sentence注意事项 2. 统领全段，每一个句子都要支持Topic Sentence (1) So living independently at an early age is not suitable for all young adults, some young adults may need to take more time to prepare themselves before going out to struggle. (2) Young adults need to be ready to support themselves. (3) Taking time to get more education and living with families for a longer time may lead them to a better independent life because they will be well prepared for the hard life outside. (4) Still, living with their families for “too” long will not be a good idea because they could get used to it and tend to be less independent. 3.要简洁 Original： My hometown is famous because it is located by Wheaton River, which is very wide, and because it is built near an unusually steep hill called Wheaton Hill. Revised： My hometown is famous for several amazing natural features. Original： Because the click of a mouse only needs 1 second, the Internet can shorten the time considerably for people to gain access to new information, while applying the traditional methods like going to a library may cost way more time. Revised： The advantage of Internet lies in its capacity to shorten the time considerably for people to get informed. 4. 态度要坚决 In my humble opinion… I’m not sure about this, but I still want to say… There is no denying that improving the public transportation will surely alleviate the pollution caused by the carbon dioxide emission from numerous cars. One needs to know something to play any kind of musical instrument. One requires a good sense of rhythm to play any kind of musical instrument. 5. 不要太过宽泛 Transitional Words 第一段: First/ First of all/ To begin with/ To start with/ To start of