高考英语一轮复习 化难为易巧增分 写作专题 书面表达训练三步法课件.pptVIP

写作进阶提升之二 ——书面表达训练三步法 写作进阶提升 英语作文训练的三大步 第一步, 文从字顺的初级阶段 第二步, 多悟思变的过渡阶段 第三步, 文质兼美的高级阶段 * 第一步：文从字顺的初级阶段 语言错误多，汉语式的句子多 多数考生写的作文要点很全面，但是由于英语语言基础知识不扎实，语言不规范，也往往失分严重。最突出的语言错误有以下几种： （1）主谓不一致。 ① Father and I am going to visit her. ② My uncle often go to the cinema himself. （2）时态、语态混用。 ① The meal is so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. ② The old man knocked down by the car and injured badly. （3）句子成分残缺。 ① But the car which painted red didn’t stop. ② The young man running in the street fast. ③ He wouldn’t able to work out the problem. ④ We all against all forms of terrorist activities. * （4）习惯搭配乱用。 ① I very like the novel. ② Then we set off digging, planting and watering. （5）汉式英语。 a) The car is yellow colour. b)He cost five yuan to buy a new dictionary. c)Recently our village has taken place great changes. d)The factory broke out a big fire last Sunday. e)Chinese population is many. （6）名词单、复数不分。 ① He will give us a talk on American film. ② He is one of the best player in our school. * （7）赘词现象严重。 ① At last, the lost boy returned back. ② On one day, he went to the cinema. （8）用词不当。 I hope you to help the girl with her homework. （9）拼写和词形变化错误。 ① The car hitted the old man and drived away. ② On his way to school, he sew a little girl. （10）前后人称不一致。 ① Swimming and football are his favourite sports, he likes it all his life. ② The little girl usually goes to school at 7 in the morning, but today he was late for school. * （11）结构错误: a)Having heard the news, her heart beat faster and faster. b) He wrote about 300 stories, some of them had been translated into Chinese. c)We should teach children don’t play and ride bikes on the road. d)There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor. (12)词义不清楚: a)He managed to swim across