初中英语写作专题课.ppt

作文评分标准： 说明：先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。 第一档 13-15分 完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许有个别语言错误。 第二档 9-12分 符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇满足文章需要，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有一些语言错误但不影响整体理解。 第三档 5-8分 部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。 第四档 0-4分 与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出自己的思想。只能简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。 语言错误常见的有哪些： 1.名词的单复数是否应用正确 2.主谓是否一致，句型结构是否完整 3.时态和语态问题 4.Chinglish 现象 5.行文的逻辑性问题 6.词类错用用词方面，如：代词的格和指代关系，动词的搭配，形容词的比较级和最高级，副词的位置等细节方面 7.细节方面： 单词拼写及大小写字母是否正确？ 标点的使用是否正确？ 1.名词的单复数问题（句子改错） ?Joy found there was much fish in the lake. ? Many place are very dry. Joy found there were many fish in the lake. Many places are very dry. 2.主谓一致问题（句子改错） ? Everything are going very well. ? David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday. ? There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. Everything is going very well. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. 3.时态和语态问题（句子改错） 1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy. 2. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in the park. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in the park. 4.Chinglish 现象（句子改错） 1. Last Sunday, Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake. 2. I and my classmates by bus to Changzhi. Last