非谓语动词使英语书面表达多样化探析.ppt

Welcome ;Enjoy English, Enjoy life!;Writing;第六档（很好）（第一篇13～15分，第二篇22~25分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 1.覆盖所有内容要点。 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3.具有较强的书面表达能力，使用较复杂结构或较高级句子，基本无语法或词汇错误。 4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分、全文结构紧凑、篇章布局合理。; 1 汉语式英语 2 句式单一 平铺直叙 3 无过渡语 ;1;; 方法一.使用非谓语动词,代词或从句使句子简洁高档 方法二. 巧 用倒装结构增强句子的表现力. 方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式，如：复合句，强调句或with 的结构等。 ;;;Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词) ; 方法一. 2.使用代词或从句使句子简洁高档 他为他的失败找了许多借口，但是没有一个有说服力。 1.Wordy: He gave many excuses for the failure, but the excuses he gave were not convincing. 2.Concise: He gave many excuses for the failure, but none of them was convincing. 3.Or another more advanced sentence: He gave many excuses for the failure, none of which was convincing. ;;;;;方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力;1.Poor as the environment is , they all study hard.;方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式 我哥哥骑车载着我。 1.My elder brother was riding and I sat on the seat behind .(并列简单句) 2. My elder brother was riding with______________________. 从句和with 结构的互换 1.As spring comes on ,trees turn green . 2.With _______________, trees turn green. ;;;;;1.Lian Zhan and his wife/The Lians were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment/as soon as /when they arrived at the airport. 2.On arriving/On their arrival at the airport , Lian Zhan and his wife were warmly welcomed. 3.No sooner had Lian Zhan and his wife arrived at the airport than they received a warm welcome. 4.Hardly had Lian Zhan and his wife arrived at the airport when they received a warm welcome. ;; Translate the sentences: 我校是一所广东省重点中学， 位于揭阳市东面,占地约200多亩。校园很美,绿树成荫。 Our school ,(which is )a key school in Guangdong Province, lies in the east of Jieyang , covering an area of over 200 mu. It is very beautiful ,with many trees and flowers. Maybe we can use another way to express! East of Jieyang lies our school, (which is )a key school of Guangdong Province, with an area of more than 200 mu. It is beautiful, surrounded with many trees. ;表达多样 文章增“靓”