Unit3Ahealthylife扩充句子课件（人教版选修6）.pptVIP

英语书面表达指导 ;第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点，用了丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有少些错误，全篇流畅，连词使用较好。;第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。 zxxk;一、利用文章总体模板;3. 结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语;二.句式多样，文章增“靓”． ;;;;句式多样 文章增“靓”;三. 善用高级词汇;3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。 A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired. B. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. ;;;方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容;例二：因广告过多， 影片放映晚点 。;１、附加成分作解释说明;１、附加成分作解释说明;２．加谚语(Proverb);２.加谚语(Proverb); 常用谚语(Proverb);;珍惜每一滴水;As students, we should start from ourselves . Here I’d like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we can change the present situation. ;“短话长说”方法：;写作任务 现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重， 很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章 参考词汇：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food 要求：1. 字数150左右 2. 对所有要点要适当发挥， 不要简单翻译。 3. 开头已给出， 不计入总数 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned_________________________; 要点分析;;;;;;合成文章; In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits , vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.;Thank you! Bye-bye!