2011高3上学期作文指导.pptVIP

评讲一质作文 ;基础写作 Every year when it is time for fresh students to come to universities, strange things happen in campuses as follows: some parents are carrying heavy luggage, but their children are walking leisurely. Whats more, some parents even do a lot of things that their children should do, such as filling in various forms while their children just look on. More surprisingly, some parents would live with their children in the university for several days. Parents should offer some help to their children if necessary, but I don’t think its right for them to do so much for their children. Instead, they should give their children more opportunities to do things by themselves, because only by doing so will young people become independent in the future. ;现象 phenomenon (复数: phenomena) 行李 luggage; baggage; suitcase 独立的(adj.) independent (反义: dependent) 轻松地走着 walk relaxly walk leisurely;病句： Parents insteaded of their children to fill in all the forms, but their children just saw on the other side. → ① Parents fill in all the forms instead of their children (who just look on). ② Children just look on, parents fill in all the forms instead. ③ Parents fill in all the forms while their children just look on. ;做某事有一些困难 have trouble/difficulty with sth. have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth. 注意：trouble前可以用 some, great, little ,much, no 等词修饰;How to write a summary?;养宠物在英国是极为普遍的现象，但是关于这一现象的争论也从未停止过，赞同者有赞同的道理，反对者也有反对的理由。以下是一些常见的理由：; Raising animals as pets enjoys a long history but opinions on this practice vary from person to person. Supporters believe that it is beneficial because animals get better shelters and foods from their owners and owners are rewarded with joy by playing games with their pets. Opponents hold the view that animals spread diseases which are harmful to peoples health. They also believe that many people are too busy to look after their pets properly. As for me, animals should not be raised as pets because they should live