（课标版）中考英语满分特训方案 第二部分 高频话题写作指导 九上 Unit 1 我们的变化课件.pptVIP

九年级（上） Unit 1;写作导图;Change a lot;写作范文详见： ;亮点句型速成; ②With the help of my teachers and classmates, my English has improved a lot now. ③I have made great progress in my English with the help of my teachers and classmates. ;常用句型：;1. I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing.;5. Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school. ;8. My parents and my teachers used to worry about me, but now they are both pleased with me.;典例剖析（2011大理）;要求： 请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文。 词数不少于60个； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名，否则以零分 计。;1. 对自己的现在和过去作比较，以此说明自己已经 长大； 2. 写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事情， 通过事例来证明自己的观点； 3. 加以总结，再次突出主题。;??范文点评】; It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. ③I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, though it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired. ;I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, ④with tears in her eyes, she said， “Dear, you have grown up.” It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.