广州一模作文讲评2014.pptVIP

基础写作主要考查学生语言结构的应用能力：能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求考生使用5个句子表达写作内容中所提供的全部内容，能够---;2---适当使用分词短语;4---能将多项并列的内容用简单、清晰的结构表达出来 ;1.按照评分标准，实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯分别给分； 2.在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范；考生是否使用了合适的句子结构； 3.在内容方面，重点评判考生是否表达了所提供的全部信息；如果考生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分； 4.在连贯方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文。;;;; 参考范文 White tea, which gets its name from its silver-white color, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types. Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan. White Tea is famous for its beautiful silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medicinal effects. The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has. White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.; 读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的语篇概括和语言表达能力。本试题要求学生就“节俭”的话题谈谈看法，内容包括：;对节俭的理解； 对节俭的重要性的论述； 就生活中如何做到节俭提出建议。;1，按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分。 2，概括应包括上述要点，并且用适当的方式进行信息整合。 3，写作的内容应该对应回答以下三个问题： 1）What’s being thrifty?/what does thriftiness mean?/What does a thrifty person do? 2)Why is being thrifty important to you? 3)What should we do to be thrifty?/What are some thrifty tips?;;;;;;;;;参考范文 Version 1 In the passage, the writer describes how he forgot his family’s thrifty tradition and eventually met with financial difficulty. This helped him realize the importance of thriftiness and start to practise thriftiness again. To me, being thrifty means valuing money, making the most what I have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things. Thrift is an old and dated concept to many young people. As life has become a lot easier, people tend to indulge in a luxurious lifestyle. That’s why I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before. ; Actually, to be thrifty can be really simple. Most of the time, it’s simply a matter of being more thoughtful in our everyday life: tur