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CET-4写作高分策略;目录;大学英语四级写作评分原则与标准;大学英语四级写作评分标准;对照标准看作文Traffic in Big Cities 1.Traffic has become a social problem in big cities. 2.One way to solve this problem is... 3.Another way is... Traffic has become a social problem in big cities. Of course，have a car is a good thing, but if every person own a car, the streets will became too crowded. so, traffic jams occurred during the rush hours and accidents happened more often. One way to solve this problem is develop public transportation system. For example, we should buy more buses and we should built more roads, especially round-the-city roads And underground trains is also a good solution. Another way is to reduce the big city’s population. Our country population control is a wise and necessary policy. If big city people reduce，traffic will less crowded.;【点评】第一句抄起始句，无问题。第二句，想说“有车是件好事” 但英文就大错特错了。须知，英文的主语一般只能是四部分组成:名词（含代词）、动名词v-ing、动词不定式to及句子。动词have是不能当主语的，至少应改为“having”。接下来，every person那动词own自然应该加“s”了。streets will后面动词用原形become，第三行so大写“s”，Traffic Jams occurred and accidents happened.动词完全不需要用过去式，那样，就给人以一种“事情已过去，现在已经不堵车，也没有交通事故”的印象。所以，议论文中使用过去式一定要合理，不要滥用。第二段“One way to solve this problem is to develop...”才行。一般来说，每句话只应有一个谓语动词（并列时当成一个看），所以，有了“is”，“develop”必须消掉（消动词有三招，to v，v-ing，v-ed过去分词）。We should build...，And应小写。underground trains is...主谓语不协调或改为trains are，或改为train is，后者更好些，因为此处是在讲 “地铁”这种形式是一个好办法。; 评分标准对我们的启示; 自我定位 努力方向 11~14 锦上添花：句库与闪光点 8~11 运筹帷幄：谋篇布局与逻辑性 5~ 8 穿针引线：过渡词与连贯性 2~ 5 祛除病句：词汇、句型、连词与从句;;目录;祛除病句：词汇、句型、连词与从句;治标：纠正常见写作错误 ;3. 主谓错位 1) Reading books can acquire knowledge. People can acquire knowledge from books. 2) Now people’s lives can’t leave TV. 　 Now people can’t do without TV.  ;二、谓语错误 　　1. 多重谓语 　　1) In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated. 　　In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks. 　　2) Poverty makes