四级作文段落写作资料.ppt

段落写作;段落的基本结构和写法;例如： Private cars benefit both individuals and nation. It is very convenient for people to drive to work, study and do many other things. By encouraging people to buy cars, the nation can stimulate consumption and the domestic demand, and enhance the national economy.;2.主题句的特点 1.）主题句一般位于句首(开门见山)，这与汉语写作中的 总结性论述常常谓语段落结尾处不同。 2.) 主题句一般是简单句。 e.g. People’s view on the holiday varies from person to person. e.g. It is well known that holiday are important for us and concerning the holiday economy, different people have different opinions.;3.) 主题句一般是议论句，表达自己的观点。要有point\ topic.这样我们后面的扩展句才能够展开。 1.Private cars benefit both individuals and nation. 2.People’s view on the holiday economy varies from person to person. 3.It is well known that holiday are important for us and concerning the holiday economy, different people have different opinions. ;对比下面两个句子： 1.Twenty students attended the school’s Christmas party. 2.The school’s Christmas party is as bore as usual. 4.)主题句除了要有topic以外，还要有controlling idea,也就是说要具体，不要大而空。 e.g. Bikes are very important. e.g. Bikes have brought a lot of convenience to our daily life.;5.)分段式主题句。没有具体的controlling idea. e.g. People have been trying to solve this problem in the following three ways:…;英语提纲式作文 中文提纲作文：分析推敲提纲与题目的关系，明确命题要求 Eg. The Changing Criteria for Good Students ①过去，人们对好学生的看法是 ②现在人们的看法已经发生改变 ③总的来说，该变化是 ;;;二、扩展句;2.）扩展句要能支持主题句的观点，因此要有具体的facts,我们可以运用理论论证、事实论证、举例论证、数据论证或解释说明等各种方式来写扩展句。做到“有话可说”。 学生范例“Practice Makes Perfect” It is well known that “Practice Makes Perfect”. So if you do not practice a lot, how can you grasp a skill? We have to practice if we want to do something perfectly. 这三个扩展句没有对论点展开具体的阐述。只是翻来覆去地重复表达自己观点，是典型空洞无物的句子。;;Sex Education 1. 现在人们越???越重视性教育 2. 开展性教育的意义 3. 家庭、学校、社会应该怎么做; 学生范例Sex Education Now, people think highly of the education about sex. As we all know, the teenagers are curious about everything especially the sex. If we don’t let the teenagers know the knowledge of sex, they m