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智课网TOEFL备考资料如何让TOEFL写作水平更上一层楼 1. 用词不当 原：The absence ofgroupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society. 改：The absence ofteamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society. 评：groupwork是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。 原：You will be dangerousif you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture. 改：You will be in dangerif you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture. 评：dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的，有危险性的”，而be indanger才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢? 原：Firstly, the job, providingthe opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, mighteffect their further development. 改：Firstly, the job,providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class,might affect their further development. 评：模样长得像，意思可不同了。这里想用动词affect表示“影响”，却误写为名词effect“效果”，一字千里啊! 2. 搭配错误 原：Nowadays, people arecrazy pursuing to be excellent. 改：Nowadays, people arecrazy about excellence. 评：这位同学显然记错了be crazyabout sth. 这个用法，写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。 原：Besides, public speechcan effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate yoursalesman career. 改：Besides, public speechcan effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate yoursalesman career. 评：此处是一个明显的动宾搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是improve theskills，而不是increase the skills。 3.词性错位 原：I will forget my sadand pressure from the work and the study. 改：I will forget mysadness and pressure from work and study. 评：sad是形容词，而这里明显需要一个名词，应该是sadness。 原：Although making moneyis a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equalsignificant. 改： …, spending time withthe family is equally significant. 评：形容词significant前需要用副词来修饰，所以equal应该改成equally。 4. 时态混乱 原：Although I have nowork experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job. 改：Although I had no workexperience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job. 评：过去时的句子中冒出了现在时，同学你太粗心了，要仔细检查哦~ 原：I would