七﹒句子转换写作导练.ppt

七、句子转换写作导练 　高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句,还是较多的语法结构,如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题。不容置疑,这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。常见的句式转换方法如下: →No matter what you say,I won’t believe.(含有状语从句) →I won’t believe what you say.(含有宾语从句) 2.改变句子的时态和语态 有的句子通过变换其时态和语态,使其表达更加符合英语习惯,读起来让人感到语言标准、地道,更富有表现力。 铃响了。 The bell is ringing now. There goes the bell! 前句虽然语法上没有错误,但却显得生硬;后句运用一般现在时态的倒装句型,更符合英语表达习惯,显得自然、地道。 3.合理使用特殊句型 为提高书面表达的档次,可根据文章中的信息要点合理使用特殊句型,如:强调句、it句型、倒装句等。 他看到报纸后才知道发生了什么事。 He knew what had happened after he read the newspaper. →He did not know what had happened until he read the newspaper. 1.The bell had no sooner rung than the boys rushed out.(改为倒装句) ? 2.I happened to have gone shopping when she came to see me.(改为it作形式主语的复合句) ? 5.Had you got up early,you wouldn抰 have been late for class. 6.It was not until I told him that he knew how to do the job. 7.Young as/though he is,he knows how to get along well with others. 8.How important it is for us to learn a foreign language well! 1.恰当地使用复合句 在书面表达中,运用简单句固然可以减少表达过程中的失误,但是,书面表达中不尝试使用复杂句,写作水平永远上不了档次。因此,要大胆地尝试使用复合句。 刘翔摔倒在赛道上,每个人都很吃惊。 Liu Xiang fell down on the track.Everybody was greatly surprised. →It was not until he read the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 用不了多久所有这些森林都会被毁掉。 All the forests will be destroyed soon. →It won’t be/take long before all the forests are destroyed. 4.使用非谓语动词或独立主格结构 在书面表达中,可以运用非谓语动词(分词、不定式、动名词)或独立主格结构把几个松散的句子整合起来,对句式加以简化,使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、精炼、灵活。 杀人犯被带了进来,双手被反绑在背后。 The murderer was brought in and his hands were tied behind his back. 在实际写作中,要想提高文章档次,就必须在文章中灵活使用复杂句式和高级表达方式。只有这样,才能从整体上提升文章的档次品位,如:2012年福建写作范文中Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.和2012年陕西写作范文中:Entering the classroom,Ms.Li was surprised to find we were standing in line,clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” →The murderer was brought in,(with) his hands tie