﹝优化指导﹞云南省2016中考英语第三部分题型综合强化题型七书面表达课件.pptVIP

题型七　书面表达 Growing up with … 提示：在你的成长过程中， 一定有人陪伴你、帮助你、影响你、感动你， 让你能够健康快乐地成长。请以“Growing up with ...”为题， 用英语写一篇短文。 要求：1.请把题目补充完整； 2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 3．文中不得使用真实姓名、 校名， 否则以零分计。 __________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 (一)审题 本篇书面表达属于半命题作文，要求考生以“Growing up with….”为题写一篇记叙文。 为了突出人物情感，考生应详细介绍成长过程中他们对自己的影响。通常用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。 (二)列举写作要点 1．先把题目补充完整：谁伴随我成长； 2．详细介绍在自己的成长过程中，他们为我们做了那些事情，注意叙述与抒情相结合； 3．总结提升，感恩祝福(Ill never forget their care and love)。 (三)常用词汇 start, primary school, have to, get up, early, do homework, so…that, on my way to school, help sb (to) do sth, importance, become interested in, no matter what, by my side (四)常用句型 1．My father always loves me and tries to help me. 2．When I was … years old, I … 3．I had to get up early and did homework every day. 4．I was so tired that I didnt like to go to school. 5．I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books. 6．No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is always by my side. 7．Im sure I will grow up better with my father. One possible version： Growing up with my father My father always loves me and tries to help me. When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and did homework every day. I was so tired that I didnt like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books. No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is always by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father. 方法突破 命题作文是依据所给题目，确定中心，选择材料，写出符合题意，内容表达具体、充分的文章。云南近几年对命题作文的考查一直较为稳定，文体偏向记叙文，或夹叙夹议的文章。 半命题作文是指命题人限定了作文题目的一部分内容，然后留出一部分内容由作者根据提示、结合对题目的理解补全标题，再进行写作的形式。这种作文形式的主要标志是作文题目中留有空缺。其特点是有较大的开放度、灵活性，给学生留下广阔的创作空间，又有一定的限制性。半命题作文补全标题后构成命题作文。 针对云南书面表达命题特点，写作时，可从以下几方面做起： 1．写作前 (1)仔细审题。考生在写作之前首先要理清题目的要求，根据所给提示和