人教版英语必修5︰Unit1periodⅳwriting.pptVIP

* Period Ⅳ Writing 原句1 John Snow was a famous doctor in London—so expert, indeed ( 插 入 语 ), that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician.(教材 P2)约翰·斯诺是伦敦一位著名的医生——他的 确医术精湛，因而成了维多利亚女王的私人大夫。 点评 这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： ①John Snow was a famous doctor in London. ②He was expert. ③He attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician. 合并之第一步：由于句②和句③之间有“如此……以至 于……”的逻辑关系，可以用“so...that...”将其合并：He was so expert that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician. 合并之第二步：省去第②句的 he was，改用破折号引出后 面的内容，再在其后加入插入语。 仿写 ①张老师是个热心的老师。他那么善良，我想，当他的学 生遇到麻烦时他一定乐意帮助他们。 (提示：热心的 warm-hearted)