初中英语看图写作基本炼习.ppt

作 文 的 评 分 标 准 1：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地 表达思想。可得0-2分 2：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分 3：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得6-8分 4：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得9-10分 看图作文可采用以下几个步骤： 1、理解图意，确立情景 2、注意所给的中英文提示 3、明确时态，理顺思路 4、连词成句，然后再连句成文 5、反复审核，修改错误 假设下面五幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。   英文日记的格式 英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。中、英文的日记格式大致一样。 英语日记的书端是写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。 日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。 今天下午我去看电影. go to a movie go to the cinema see a film It’s a fine day today. this afternoon I went to a movie happily this afternoon. 在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来. On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a man’s bike. on the way fall down from / fall off see / find + 复合宾语 我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了. I picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didn’t hear me and rode away. pick up shout to ride away 于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主. I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man. stop a taxi catch up with 我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他. 失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了. I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him. The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused. give back / return refuse May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. After picking up the case, I shouted to the man loudly. 把两个或多个句子合并为简单句 1、把其中一句改为介词短语 I gave the case back to the man. The man took out some money to thank me. Getting the case back from me, the man took o