TEM8作文试卷评析〔上〕.ppt

英语专业八级考试在线课堂 如： Topic: How to Solve Traffic Problem? General Statement : One of the most serious problems that most big cities are confronted with is traffic congestion. This problem is caused by thousands of cars coming into the cities from the suburban areas as well as from different parts of the country for business. This mammoth problem must be resolved before it gets worse. It gives a general background of the topic. 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 Thesis Statement： The heavy traffic problem can be solved by building rapid transit systems from the suburbs to the cities, by improving pubic transportation systems within the cities, and by forming car pools. It indicates the overall “plan” of the essay. 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 中间部分 议论文的结构是否严谨，条理是否清楚，论证是否严密，论据是否妥当，关键在第二部分，即中间段的写作。 结构、条理、论证和论据等是八级议论文评分的重要细则之一，因而，写作的时候要尽量符合这些标准。 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 The Body Part 1 Your argumentative topic sentence 2.Supportive sentence the reasons for a view being valid. 3. Detailed support evidence: examples, statistics 4. Concluding sentence 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 作文（2）中的第二部分由5段组成，结构比较凌乱，条理性不强，首句主题意思不明确。 1. China has large territory and population, as well as a large number of dialects, which are greatly different from each other. There are many people still cant speak or understand putonghua, the standard language. Main public places, such as subway stations and airports in big cities, have a great amount of people who may speak different dialects. 2. Therefore, it is necessary to provide service in dialect, so that people from different places, speaking their local dialects can receive the same service and convenience. Otherwise, it is a sign of discrimination to provide exclusive service in mandarin. 3. For another part, people who speak dialects may come across emergencies, and under that condition, putonghua may be more helpful and significant. In addition, it is not necessary to worry that providing dialect service may counter the national policy to promote putonghua. From those dialect speaking people’s pe