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书面表达训练：漫画议论文（一） 一、单幅画议论文写作三部曲 1.第一段：描述漫画内容，以说明为主，使用现在时态和第三人称；也可以以记叙为主使用过去时态和第三人称。常用句型：①This is a picture about…；②In the picture we can see…；③From the picture it can be seen that… 2.第二段：通过对画面内容的分析，去粗了以精，揣摩画意，揭示实质，提出论点。 3.第三段：与现实生活联系，发表评论，进行论证，提出个人看法及解决办法。常句型： ④We can draw a conclusion that…；⑤The story tells us that…；⑥It teaches us a lesson…；⑦In my opinion,… It makes us think more.；⑧The scene is common nowadays. 二、图画议论文作文特别提醒 单幅画议化文易犯的两个错误： 1．画面内容和开放的议论部分不能黄金分割。要么画面内容描写过多，议论部分一笔带过；要么描述画面内容过于简单，而议论部分则泛泛而谈。 2．“悟意”错误，导致离题。不能通过画面的表面内容把握图画的实质，即不能“悟意”，结果在联系现实生活发表评论时，就会偏离主题。 三、作文范例 请根据漫画，以“What will the child become?” 为标题，写一篇短文。 高三（10）班：韦偕蓉 What will the child become? Look at this picture．Here is a family of five．The only child is riding his “horse”—his father．What a proud “king” he looks! His grandfather is holding an umbrella over him and cooling him with a fan．His mother is carrying his schoolbag and lots of other things for him．What is his grandmother doing behind? She is working hard carrying an electronic piano and a drawing board． But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think himself more important than anyone else．Will he be able to do anything without help? He’ll become no good for the world． In my opinion, it is the parents who are to blame for the spoiled child．If a child always grows up like the flowers in the greenhouse, how can he face the challenge in society．As teenagers, we should learn to live an independent life．Only in this way can we survive the fierce competition in the future． 你一定要坚强，即使受过伤，流过泪，也能咬牙走下去。因为，人生，就是你一个人的人生。 ============================================================================ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 命运如同手中的掌纹，无论多曲折，终掌握在自己手中 ============================================================== _________________________________