eric EB2006 Assessment 1 Step 1 Assessment Feedback Form 2012-2013_provisional.docVIP

Assessment Feedback Sheet Module Code EB2006 Module Title English for International Business 2 Module Tutor UCLan Student ID Number G20 Student Name (in pinyin) Programme EIB Group number (circle) Society DIP BA 1 2 3 4 assessment title/number Step one of Report This assignment represents all my own work; any reference made to books, magazines, papers, any other publications or unpublished work written by other people is fully acknowledged in the bibliogrpahy. I understand that plagiarism can attract severe academic penalties even expulsion from university. Sign here Submission Deadline 3-7 Dec 2006 = Excellent = Good - = Fair X = Unsatisfactory/Incomplete Feedback Grading Criteria Content (50%) You have thoroughly considered the case study content to determine the main issues with Leatty Shanghai’s (LS) phase 1of the project. Your proposal addresses the issues that LS is facing and makes justified recommendations for improvement. You show evidence of considering all 4 areas identified for improvement by LS: Communication, team morale, working practice, information exchange and communication of tasks. You use creative and critical thinking for your analysis of problems and creation of recommendations. You incorporate material used in other classes into your analysis. Language Presentation (50%) You give appropriate names to the sections and sub-sections of your proposal to guide the reader through your ideas. You use appropriate academic English in organizational style and register. You have few vocabulary and grammatical errors. You use referencing properly to cite any outside sources used. You use the outline template to plan your report and it is neatly typed and presented with care. Strengths: Areas for Improvement: If there is something you do not understand or some aspect on which you want further information, please make an appointment with your tut