历年高中考试英语满分写作.docxVIP

2012高考英语满分作文（上海）描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：详细描述用餐的情况简要表述你对这次午餐的感受这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。范文：The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen massive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional value to that foundelsewhere.The typical schedule of a highschooleras extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare time when overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversationwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, refreshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)一、语法解构现在分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang倒装句(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arum for the school canteen状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenmassive queue had formed.在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently。二【网络综合 - 高考英语作文】以下是无忧考网为大家整理的《2015年高考英语作文预测：减负之后》的文章，供大家参考阅读！【减负之后】　　减负后，你有了更多的可自由支配的时间。请写一篇短文，记述你上周末的活动及感受。内容需包括：　　1. 你和父母或你和同学(朋友)的一次外出活动;　　2. 你的自主学习活动;　　3. 你的感受。　　注意：1.不可逐条翻译;2.词数不少于100词。　　【参考范文】　　Since our learning burden