Module3MyFirstRideonaTrainPeriodFourCulturalCorner课件(外研版必修1课标通用).pptVIP

①日记的时态多用一般过去时，写作时要按照一定的时间或空间顺序，运用then，after that，by the time，finally等词汇来衔接。 ②多用第一人称we/I，如果是集体活动，在叙述时可用some...；while others...等。 ③先叙述事情，后抒发感情/体会或收获。 第二步：提炼要点 1. 国庆节 the National Day 2．难忘的unforgettable；memorable 3．名胜place of interest; interesting tourist sights 4．照相take photos；take pictures 5．出发start off；set off；leave 6. 沙滩散步walk on the sands 7．看风景enjoy the scenery 第三步：扩点成句 1．We visited some places of interest. 我们游览了几个名胜。 2．We first went to the attractive seaside. 我们首先去了美丽的海边。 3．We took some photos，walked on the sands and swam in the sea as much as we liked. 我们尽情地拍照片，在沙滩散步，在海中游泳。 4．It is a most beautiful place for travellers to visit. 它是一个游客们游览的极美的地方。 5．We enjoyed the wonderful scenery. 我们欣赏了美丽的景色。 【参考范文】 Saturday，October 1 stFine Today，I with my foreign friend Mary，visited some places of interest in Qingdao. Early in the morning，we started off by car.We first went to the attractive seaside, where we took some photos，walked on the sands and swam in the sea as much as we liked.Then，we visited the famous Beer Castle.At noon，we ate much delicious seafood and barbecue there，drinking the well-known Qingdao Beer，from which we learned more about this modern city.After lunch，we drove to Mountain Lao. It is a most beautiful place for travelers to visit, and on the mountain we enjoyed the wonderful scenery of green trees and white clouds.Time passed quickly.At about five oclock，we drove back home delightedly. We were both completely exhausted，but we felt very happy，because we spent an unforgettable“National Day”． 【亮点展示】 1．本文格式符合日记的形式。第一段简短的介绍了人物、事件，表明了写作的由来。 2．第二段叙述了在青岛一天的游览经历。分别使用了Early in the morning，first，Then，At noon，After lunch，Time passed quickly，At about five oclock等表示时间的词汇，使得文章条理清晰。 3．灵活使用多种表达，使得句式结构不单一。We first went to the attractive seaside, where we took some photos，walked on the sands and swam in the sea as much as we liked.是定语从句；drinking the well-known Qingdao Beer，是伴随状语；from which we learned more about this modern city是介词＋ 关系代词的定语从句； It is a most beautiful place