四六与级应试技巧1：写作训练.ppt

大学英语四、六级考试 写作知识与技巧 ;四、六级答题顺序;四、六级答题顺序时间;四、六级的分值分布;四、六级作文的考试要求; 2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分…基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 6 … 8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 9--------------- 11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。;句子写作训练; 正确无误的句子标准;常见问题;2. 主谓不一致 例如: Average number of hours a student spend on the Internet keeps increasing very fast. 应改为：The average hours a student spends on the Internet keep increasing rapidly.;3.句子不间断 I have a brother, he thinks that “6” and “8” are lucky numbers to Chinese people. 两个分句之间缺乏关联此，仅用逗号连接。尽管在现代英语中，用逗号连接两个分句的情况越来越常见，但是在正式的文体中，还是要尽量避免出现此类句子。 I have a brother who thinks that “6” and “8” are lucky numbers to Chinese people. ?;? 4. 时态混乱 There are almost no car on the road. Maybe the drivers got careless. There was almost no car on the road at that time, so the driver must have been very careless. ;5.??? 逻辑混乱 1）修饰语错位 She put the scarf around her neck that she bought yesterday. She put around her neck the scarf that she bought yesterday.;2) 悬垂修饰语 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语所修饰的成分没有明确指出，造成句子逻辑关系的混乱。 To do well in college, high marks are essential. To do well in college, a student needs high marks. ;6. 中式英语 考生作文中经常出现英语汉化的现象，即中式英语的问题。比如Man is iron, and food is steel, Women are half side sky 等说法。如何克服中式思维带来的影响，关键在于动笔前先思考一下类似的英文句式，尽量找到规范的英语表达方式，不能随心所欲。 This is because fake commodities can make a lot of money. 中文口语中，我们用“假货可以赚很多”来表达“通过生产或销售假货，人们可以赚很多钱”的意思。但这不符合英语的表达习惯，fake commodities 作make a lot of money 的逻辑主语，会让人难以理解。 This is because one is likely to make a lot of money by producing or selling fake commodities.;四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式;?????????1．表示原因 ????1）There are three reasons for this． ?2）The reasons for this are as follows． ?3）The reason for this is obvious．?4）The reason for this is not far to seek． ?5）The reason for this is that．．． ?6）We have good reason to believe that …????????????????????　　; 2．表示好处????????　　 1）It has the following advantages． ????????　　2）It does us a lot of