Writing四级写作指导.ppt

Utilitarian Courses or Elementary Courses 写作指南：这是四级作文中典型的比较型作文，要求考生从目前大学生面临就业压力、实用主义观念盛行的背景下，权衡并分析实用课程和基础课程的重要性。考生可以自由阐述个人观点，可以是有倾向性的选择（即表述其中一种课程的重要性），也可以是中立式的论述（即表述两者同等的重要性）。 Sample [1] The phenomenon of tight labor market has given rise to a heated discussion: whether our universities should focus more on practical courses? [2] I am of the opinion that our education should equip students with more utilitarian courses. [3] It is true that a university should establish the structure of the students’ knowledge. And basic courses will help the students to develop such abilities as logic thinking and judgment. [4]However, it is more essential to be armed with advanced science and technology, as is conveyed in the famous saying “the survival of the fittest”. [5] Only in this way, could we survive the cruel competition. [6] What’s equally important, acquiring more advanced utilitarian knowledge, we could keep up with the pace of the information era. [7] All in all, I strongly recommend that the courses should be practical so as to adjust the students to the needs of the job market. 高分作文 “闪光点” 结构：清晰的结构是最大的 “闪光点”。 词和词组：词和词组必须符合上下文特定的语境。对于词组的使用直接体现一个人的写作功力。尽量不要用太常用的词。 Example: think ( argue, hold, maintain, take it for granted） 句型：避免出现破句、断句、连写句等明显错误。尽量加大并列句和复合句的比例，而尽量减少简单句的比例。多用非谓语动词结构，独立主格结构。 典型错句： There are more and more students use computer. ●There are more and more students using computer. ●There are more and more students who use computer. 举例：典型的例子可以非常生动，形象地证明自己的观点。举例不宜太长，须精练，否则会导致文章比例失调，有时甚至回不到文章的主题上来。Take…for example/ let’s take… as an example/ a good case in point is that… 谚语与名言：谚语和名言都是人类智慧的结晶，以简练的话语来说明深刻的内涵。使用它们要与上下文相切合，且不宜过多，一般一篇文章中使用一至两处即可。As the famous saying( proverb) goes…/ General Douglas MacArthur once said, “people grow old by deserting their ideals. Years may wrinkle the skin, but to give up wrinkles the soul. 修辞（rhetorics/figures of speech ) Life is a journey. (metaphor） The past twenty years witnessed the fast dev