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高考书面表达的复习训练策略 练 习 书面表达如何写？ 练 习 审 题 词 句 文 参 考 答 案 欢迎你的光临 改写语句 标点、时态 1. Dear Mr. Green : I received the book《Harry Potter》you give me the other day. Dear Mr. Green , I received the book “ Harry Potter ” you gave me the other day. 写作基础要扎实 写作技法要跟上 内容要求：避免跑题；面面俱到 结构要求：层次分明；一目了然 词汇要求：避免单一；使用高级词汇 句式要求：简单句须有复杂结构相伴 写作格式最好长短交错式 复合句表述最讲恰到好处 写作格式最好长短交错式 注意： （1）大小写使用太随便，字母写的不清； （2）标点符号用错乱用，乱点现象 （3）单词拼写错误 （4）句子汉语化 （5）错用短语结构 （6）主谓不一致 （7）可数与不可数名词使用错误 （8）简单语法结构包括句型使用错误 （9）固定结构中出现错误，即结构没有记准确 （10）形容词与副词使用混乱 （11）用词不当（词义以及习惯用法） （12）滥用错用典型结构或句型；或者将结构记得不准确 （13）动词时态的错误 （14）避免重复使用同一词 （15）连词用错 （16）句式单调，或过于简单 联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。 2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。 注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。 　　　2）词数：100-120之间。 Practice 书面表达： Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④ live a much better