英语写作-句型使用.ppt

阅卷者喜欢什么样的文章？ 1、书写工整，卷面整洁 2、紧扣主题，逻辑清晰 3、语言简约，语法正确 4、要点齐全，细节完整 5、详略得当，适当发挥 优秀作文的六个特性 给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象 选词造句指点迷津 一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。 你将很容易找到我的家 You will find my house easily. 1、You will find my house easily. 她很喜欢运动。 She likes sports very much. She is fond of sports. She is into sports. She is interested in sports. She enjoys sports. 我们将尽力学好英语。 1.I hope to receive your letter soon. 2.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable. 二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词,短语选择使用其他恰当的同义词、词组来代替。 1.He learns English well,he learns maths well ,too. 2.An earthquake happened in Wenchuan. It happened on May 12th. 三、学会套用句型 1.He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther. Because people communicate in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English. With so many people communicating in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English. With+宾语+宾语补足语（doing/done/adj/to do/adv…） 1.Because he has a lot of homework to do, he doesn’t watch TV. 2.Mr.li came into the classroom, he has a book in his hand. 3.The farmer sleeps, and his window is open. 2.If you study hard, you will make great progress. Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress. I was late for school because I got up late. 四、通过合句，将意义相关的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过收缩，去掉一些多余的成分，或无意义的重复，避免冗长累赘，松散无力，以增强句子的连贯性，达到更好的表达效果。 I am seventeen years old this year,that is to say,I’ll be eighteen years old in 2011. The school is surrounded by many green trees.It looks very beautiful. 五、有效的使用句子间的连接成分，使句子间的逻辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，连贯流畅。 Cellphone is popular among teenagers. Cellphone makes it possible for teenagers to talk with their family. Cellphone makes teenagers feel cool. cellphone is popular among teenagers. cellphones make it possible for teenagers to talk with their family. cellphones make teenagers feel cool. 但是值得提醒的是，同学们