上海高考英语作文指导.pptVIP

——One with both description and illustration The basic structure Part One: Introduction Part Two: Body Part Three: Conclusion Conclusion, proposal, determination, expectation Background information Personal point of view Topic Sentences Supporting sentences Description and illustration Firstly, a good command of English adds to my confidence in accomplishing all the tasks well. Since English is a universal language, being equipped with a large vocabulary and fluent in spoken English will play a big role. Secondly, I believe that a certain extent of knowledge in history, culture and customs is what a tour guide can’t afford to lack. Therefore, an interest in culture since early of my age serves to make me a qualified tour guide. Thirdly, the job of a tour guide is quite demanding and needs continuous efforts. Being both physically and mentally well, I’m fully prepared to embrace all kinds of challenges in the work. 作文题目： 请简要介绍一次给你留下深刻印象的课堂小组活动，并谈谈你对这种组织形式的看法。 An outline Para. 1：引入话题 Para. 2：活动的过程 Para. 3：“我”的看法 Para. 4：结论 Brainstorming Group activities What do students do? What does the teacher assign? What’s the theme? What do you get? What’s your attitude? A more specific outline Para. 1：引入话题 Para. 2：活动的过程 Para. 3：“我”的看法 Para. 4：结论 Opening Paragraph Open the book of memory, and I can easily recall many wonderful group activities in class. A shining experience lies in my heart-- one in a Chinese lesson. 开门见山，导入话题的语句要有，但最多不超过2句。 第一段要亮出全文中心观点或主题。 Developing Paragraph (I) That day, our Chinese teacher asked us to tell a historical story to others which was not known to many people and make a discussion about it. What surprised me much was not the heated discussion, but the stories we ourselves told. I had never expected that almost everyone had a fertile knowledge and broad horizons. There were so many interesting stories as I had never heard. In the end, we all began to realize that it was the real purpose of the teacher of this lesson.