母爱 评语(国外英文资料).docVIP

母爱 评语(国外英文资料) The surface description is concise and distinct. A few white hairs let mother anxious and haggard yueranzhishang. Overall comment The first words leads to their feelings, then choose life examples to show the broad selfless mother love, reverence shows between the lines. When choosing a case, the author considers the mothers love and education from her mothers life, study and life to show her love. She has a clear and smooth style and a clear theme. At the beginning of parallelism, emotional rendering. Exquisite inner description, fascinating. A smile, a thousand words in the meantime. Overall comment Wonderful moments, memories; a kind teacher is right in front of us. The touching complex of teachers and students is impressive. Purpose: a small title, to show a variety of emotions, rich in nature. After the description, a word ending, memorable. Selection: three small things, showing emotional multifaceted. Each has its own characteristics, and its characters are rich and solid. Level: the total structure begins with the beautiful sentence parallelism, rendering the emotion; then, heading into meanders. After a description, the rich image is vividly portrayed. Text: natural and simple, fresh and pleasant. The end of each sentence is evocative. The teachers and students get along well with each other. One day, the more deep feelings. Fresh pictures, flowing words, feel the pure beauty together. Overall comment People say, fathers love is like a mountain, but dad doesnt know how to express love.. The author seized on the examples of life and fully demonstrated a fathers broad and selfless feelings. Through vivid action description, the article shows the fathers meticulous care for his child. In the election case, the author made a detailed and profound description of the inner world of the characters and sublimated the theme of the article. The first paragraph, first write yourself, do not understand what is the mothers love, and then write a thing, the