舞狮英文介绍.ppt

改正后的译文: In general, the lion dance is performed by two persons, which one handling the head, the other playing the body and the tail. ? (4) “Accompaning with the music of gong and drum, performers play all kinds of lion’s actions.” 个人分析：首先这句话的错误就是将词accompanying错写为accompaning，个人认为这都是马虎导致的。其次，就是锣鼓的翻译是gongs and drums，而该学生翻译时没有注意到锣鼓并不能只有单独的一个锣或者鼓，所以只要细心这个词的翻译是可以准确表达的。最后一点该学生没有注意到对句子时态的把握，应该将play改为played。 改正后的译文: Accompanying with the music of gongs and drums, performers played all kinds of lion’s actions. (5) “Lion dance became world famous for overseas Chinese, especially in Southeast-Asia countries, but every country and region have their own dance style.” 个人分析：首先该学生的第一个分句的翻译是错误的，没表达出原句的意思，应该翻译成“As the Chinese migrate abroad，lion dance became world-renowned”。其次，有很多同学将world famous写成world-famous，这里说明一下这两种写法都是正确的。第三，Southeast-Asia 翻译的不正确，应该改为Southeast Asian。第四，最后一个分句的翻译上have their应该改为has its，dance应该改为dancing。 改正后的译文: As the Chinese migrate abroad，lion dance became world-renowned, especially in Southeast Asian countries, but every country and region has its own dancing style. 【我的译文】 Lion dance is a traditional dancing form in China, which can be often seen in important festivals and grand activities. Lion dance originated from the Three Kingdoms Period, with a 1000-year history. Lion dance was always performed by two people. One played the lion’s head and the other played the lion’s body and tail. They perform all kinds of lion’s actions with the music played by gongs and drums. As the Chinese go overseas, lion dance is world-famous, especially in Southeast Asian countries. However, each country and region has its own dancing style. ? 【参考译文】 Lion dance is a form of traditional dance in China, which can be often seen in important festivals and great events. With a history of over 1,000 years, lion dance can date back to the Three Kingdoms Period. There are usually two performers in lion dance, one handling the lions head, and the o