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5发生大幅(国外英文资料) Our students composition has several main problems: First, English is too thin. Second, the vocabulary is too small, and the vocabulary memory is not clear. Third, expressing ideas is not clear. Lets do the analysis with the examinees actual composition. 1) Some one consider that fresh water will not touch its end. (January 96, 2) 2) One mans life lack of money, he will impossible to live on. (in January 95, 5) 3) As is know, that there are much fake commodities in todays society. (in December 1997, 6 points) Examples cited here is in line with the students throughout the thesis