话题12如何用英语描写饮食.docVIP

话题 12 如何用英语描写饮食 Food and drink 必走三步 请根据下表用英语写一篇短文，介绍某地区五年来人们饮食的变化情况，内容包括： 2001 2002 2003 2004 2005 Grain 44％ 44％ 43％ 42％ 42％ Meat 19％ 21％ 23％ 23％ 22％ Fruit vegetables 25％ 23％ 21％ 21％ 22％ Milk 12％ 12％ 13％ 14％ 14％ Total 100％ 100％ 100％ 100％ 100％ 1．饮食变化的总的情况。 2．说明人们饮食方面发生变化的原因。 3．变化说明了什么及带来的益处。 注意：题目已给出，词数 100 — 120。 第一步：认真审题，提炼要点 一审格式：这是一篇以数字表格形式出现的说明文。 二审结构：因为这是一篇表格式的说明文，数据非常之多，涉及的面也比较广，所以，作者需进行细致的观察与分析，从这些数据中找出一定的规律，然后得出结论。首先用一句话进行概括，说明人们的饮食结构从 2001 年至 2005 年发生了很大的变化，接着从两个方而分析饮食变化的原因，最后，得出结论：这些变化反映了人民生活水平的变化。注意文章条理要清楚，用词要准确。如表示升降的词汇可用：dropped... to，increased from... to... 等。 三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。 1．great changes in peoples diet from 2001 to 2005 2．a) grain consumption dropped 2％ b) milk consumption increased from 12％ in 2001 to 14％ in 2005 3．from 2001 to 2003 a) the meat consumption increased from 19％ to 23％ b) the consumption of fruit and vegetables dropped from 25％ to 21％ 4．from 2004 to 2005 a) the meat consumption dropped a little to 22％ b) the consumption of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 22％ 5．a) people at better off and could afford more nutritious food b) more and more people begin to pay attention to the quality of their diet 6．good for their health 7．living a better life 第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句 1．There were great changes in peoples diet from 2001 to 2005． 2．a) The grain consumption dropped 2％ from 2001 to 2005 in total food consumption． b) The milk consumption intcreased from 12％ in 2001 to 14％ in 2005． 3．a) But from 2001 to 2003，the meat consumption increased from 19％ to 23％ b) The consumption of fruit and vegetables dropped from 25％ to 21％． 4．a) From 2004 to 2005，the meat consumption dropped a little to 22％． b) The consumption of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 22％． 5．a) People are better off and could afford more nutritious food． b) More and more people begin to pay attention to the quality of their diet．