英语与四六级写作讲座.pptVIP

大学英语四级考试 写作篇 试卷要求 Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 　　1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切　　2. 为了让孩子独立, 父母应该…… 　　How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? 评分原则  1.CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。 2.CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。 评分标准 1. 短文写作部分满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、 5分、及2分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)，但不得加或减半分。 评分标准 14分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。（漂漂亮亮） 11分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。（清清楚楚） 8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。 （马马虎虎） 5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。（稀里糊涂） 2分 —— 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。 （一塌糊涂） 字数不足应酌情扣分 各档作文相当于百分制的得分 14 points These days many parents tend to make all decisions for their children for fear that they might do something wrong. The parents’ purpose is quite clear: to protect their kids from possible failures. But this practice turns out to make their children increasingly dependent on them. For their children’s future development, parents should help them to be independent. The earlier they take measures to do so, the more benefit their children will get. Parents should first teach their children how to make plan, an indispensable skill for their future survival. Parents should also give their children more freedom, a must to children’s independence. If the children only follow rules set by their parents, they will never gain the sense of independence. Most importantly, parents should be open to different ideas from their children. If children feel that their ideas are well li