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翻译实践（7）- 错误译例 5. 设置在轴上的刀具由两种刀具来构成 错误：The cutters set on shaft are two types 正确：The cutters arranged on shaft are two types 【A设置或安装，位于在B上，只能用arrange 不能用set】 6. 采用移动式结构，便于在普通家庭中使用；采用鹅卵石为按摩头，按摩效果好，美观大方，具有一定的装饰效果。 错误：The movable structure is easy to use in the ordinary households; using the cobblestones as the massage heads, which has the good massage effect, beautiful appearance and certain decorative effects. 正确：By adopting the movable structure, the utility model is easy to use in the ordinary households; by using the cobblestones as the massage heads, the utility model has good massage effect, beautiful appearance and certain decorative effects. 【翻译时，要弄清楚逻辑关系，找到主语，注意语法。】 翻译实践（8）- 错误译例 7. 例如：双螺杆挤出装置的出料口对应布料装置的上料端，布料装置的卸料端对应干燥装置的上料端 错误：the material outlet of the twin screw extrusion device is relevant with the loading end of the material distribution device, whose material discharging end is relevant with the loading end of the drying device 正确：the material outlet of the twin screw extrusion device is corresponding to the loading end of the material distribution device, material discharging end of the material distribution device is corresponding to the loading end of the drying device 【尽量不要whose指代， 用原名称即可; ……与……相对应：be corresponding to】 翻译实践（9）- 错误译例 8.“通风孔上方并延伸遮蔽通风孔的遮阳板” 【原译文】“a sunshade plate is arranged above the ventilation holes and extends to cover the ventilation holes” 【修订】“a sunshade plate is arranged above the ventilation holes and extends to cover thereof”； 【所属关系中部分内容前面已经出现过，可用thereof 表述以避免重复】 9. 提供一种结构合理，冷却效果好，球磨时间短，料浆粒度分布范围合理的球磨机。 错误：The utility model aims to provide a ball grinder with a reasonable structure, a good cooling effect, a short ball grinding time and a reasonable slurry granularity distributing scope 正确：The utility model aims to provide a ball grinder with reasonable structure, good cooling effect, short ball grinding time and reasonable slurry granularity distributing scope 【表示特性，特征和优点的名词前，不需要加a。】 * * * * * * * * 专利的语言特点-权利要