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期末作文讲评 看法\建议 08-09上期末作文 假设你叫李明,是英国中学生约翰的笔友.请根据他的来信内容写一封回信.针对他的问题，谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉他应该做什么,不应该做什么? Dear Liming, How is everything? As you know， I like eating hamburgers and drinking Coke. But my parents have stopped giving me pocket money. They don’t allow me to have that kind of things any more only because I’m getting a little heavier and getting tired easily. So I feel unhappy and I don’t want to talk with them at home. I’m now even thinking of asking for some money from my grandparents without telling them. What should I do? I’m looking forward to your advice. Yours, John Dear John, Nice to hear from you. Now I know your trouble. I think your parents are right. They love you and what they did is good for you. It’s important for us to keep fit, so you shouldn’t eat much junk food. You’d better eat more vegetables and fruit. You should drink water instead of Coke. Besides, why don’t you do some sports every day. It’s good for your health, too. On the other hand, you shouldn’t ask for money from your grandparents. In my opinion, it’s a good idea to talk with your parents about it. If you don’t spend money on junk food, your parents will keep giving you some pocket money. I hope you can solve the problem soon. Yours, Li Ming Related Practice 1 假如你是李明,你的美国笔友发给你一份邮件。请针对他的问题， 结合自己的经历, 做做他的思想工作。告诉他你起先是如何做的，后来有了什么变化，在给他提一些建议。 Dear Li Ming, I’ve got some serious problems. All the subjects have made me very tired. I’ve failed so many exams that I really want to give up my study. What shall I do? Please help me. Tom Dear Tom, Nice to hear from you. Now I know your problems. Don’t worry. I had the same problems last year. I was weak in English and I almost gave up English learning. But I kept on learning hard and doing homework more carefully than before. Now I can follow teachers and catch up with other students. I have made great progress .Ok, Let me give you some advice. First, don’t give up your study. If you liste