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Argument In the article the author argues that X. The conclusion is reached based on the N arguments/supporting points as follows./ The author buttressed up/ bolstered the argument with the evidence and reasonings as follows. Firstly, A. Moreover, B. The arguments seem logical and reasonable at first glance, but further reflection/ examination would reveal that the deduction conducted here is actually logical flawed and groundless. Also, the author fails to take consideration of several critical factors which might be important for judging this particular issue. I will illustrate my criticism as follows. To begin with, x. The lack of cautious deduction in this particular point clearly puts forward the most seious threat to the plausibility of the argument. Besides, y. Furthermore, z. In conclusion, the arguments dicussed in the articles are not compelling in logic, present unsubstantial evidences for the XXX, and also fail to take into consideration other significant factors for judging the issue. In order to solidate the conclusion, the author must provide/present more detailed and convincing evidence for demonstrating the potential and rationality XXX acurately and make a more well-rounded analysis by ruling out all the above mentioned possibilities that otherwise might undermine the argument. [强加因果] Moreover, the author incautiously assert that X. But A doesn’t necessarily guarantee B, let alone C. Actually the mere fact that A precedes B/ A coincides with B doesn’t necessarily prove the causality between A and B. [不当假设] To begin with, the author based his arguments on the gratuitous assumption that A can do B. There is, however, no guarantee that this is the case, especially if we consider C. Lacking this assumption, the expectation of increased efficiency is entirely unfounded/ unjustified. [没有考虑其他因素] The author’s failure to consider and eliminate other possible explanations for B renders the conclusion highly suspect. The argument relies on an oversimplified r