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英语写作要领及技巧 大学英语（CET4，CET6）作文要求 写作时间：30分钟 作文字数：100---150字 评分标准： A）是否切题 B）是否表达思想清楚 C）是否连贯通顺 D）是否存在或严重存在语言错误 Sentence Writing 用词必须明确、具体。 多用主动语态 省去不必要的词 不要滥用并列句 正确选择并列连词 避免悬垂分词 不要改变说话角度 避免主次颠倒 注意标点符号的使用 ★用词必须明确、具体 Ex: A) He was not very often on time. He usually came late. B) He did not think that studying Latin was of much use He thought the study of Latin useless. C) He show satisfaction as the took possession of his well earned reward. He grinned as he pocketed. 多用主动语态 My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me. My first visit to Boston will always be remembered. I shall always remember my first visit to Boston. 省去不必要的词 The question as to whether it is right or wrong depends. The question whether it is right or wrong depends. His story is a strange one. His story is strange. This is a subject that arouses public attention. This subject arouses public attention. 省去不必要的词 In spite of the fact that she was in a hurry, she stopped to talk. Although she was in a hurry, she stopped to talk. The fact that you had not succeeded in the examination should not deter you from trying again. Your failure in the examination should not deter you from trying again. 不要滥用并列句 We are going to the countryside this summer, and we are going to visit my grandmother. We are going to the countryside this summer to visit my grandmother. My friend told me that I had won the scholarship, and I was overjoyed. When my friend told me that I had won the scholarship, I was overjoyed. 正确选择并列连词 It is time for the curtain to rise ; and only a few of the audience have yet come. It is time for the curtain to rise , but only a few of the audience have yet come. 避免悬垂分词 Flying at 12,000 feet, the countryside looks like a green check tablecloth. When you fly at 12,000 feet, the countryside looks like a green check tablecloth. Walking through the fields, the wild flowers flowers are an interesting subject to study. As one walks through the fields, the wild flow