串讲四级作文评分标准.pptVIP

2 分 （基本没有一句正确的话，字数不足，且拼写错误多） 1. Recreational activities have very much kinds, it inclouad PE, art activit, musick, play games and so on. So much kinds recreational acitivities in our morden world so that our think unclear. 5分 （错误多，字数比较危险，且逻辑混乱） 2. Nowadays, people’s press is growing larger. They need more to take it easy. Recreational activities are the best way to choose. There are many kinds of different recreational activities such as from out to in door, from body to mental. Every body can choose the most proper for himself. 3. In recent years, with the developing of economics and social, there are more and more recreational activities. If you have enough time, you can participate in these activities everyday. 　However, is it good for our life to have more recreational activities? It’s my mind that recreational activities must adapt to our life styles. We must make a good choice on how much time we can used to work and how much to recreational activities. 8 分（有一定语言能力，最大的问题就是结构乱，没有逻辑，缺少连接过渡，利用模版正好应对） If we put sometimes on recreational activities, but not much more time, we can have a healthy life. But if we put all time on it and don’t work, it’s very harmful to our life. 　As a college student, the major duty is study hard. We can have recreational activities, but we can’t forge that our duty is still study. I hope we can manage well our time. 4. Today people have all kinds of recreational activities. With the help of the computer and the internet, we may choose to play computer games or enjoy ourselves on the Internet. Taking exercise is also a good choice. It may relax us and be good to our health. And reading books is also a good kind of recreational activities. But we should remember that recreational activities have both good and bad effects. With a little recreational activity after working, you can relax yourself, and improve your work efficiency. Recreational activities can also make you more friends. As a university student, we should