英语优秀作文欣赏及名人名言.doc

看图作文：优秀作文欣赏（话题：下定决心才能成功） In the picture we can see that a snail finds a tree with green leaves on the top. Attracted by the delicious leaves, the snail immediately sets about climbing. It tries its best but still fails to get to the top. It falls off the tree and bumps(碰撞) into the ground, painful and dizzy. Nevertheless(然而), it doesn’t lose heart. It raises its spirits(打起精神) to try once more, successfully gaining its delicious dish this time. The meaning revealed/conveyed in the picture is evident, that is, we are supposed to be determined enough to reach our goals. It is the strong mind that contributes to the little snail’s success. Without determination, it would be impossible for it to get the fascinating leaves. The same goes for(对于…...也一样) us human beings. As the proverb goes, “Man is made of blood and flesh, and a special fiber(纤维) called determination.” Determination is the precursor(先驱) to success. From my perspective（视角）, all of us ought to have determination. It helps us to be strong-minded to overcome the obstacles ahead, especially when we are on a tough road. With determination, we can be motivated(促动，激发) to chase our dreams(追逐梦想) and to perform better in study. Hence(因此) don’t be afraid of failure — be determined! Remember, our aims will be unquestionably attained! 二. 如何写高分作文？ 一篇作文的优劣，无论是记叙文、议论文、说明文还是夹叙夹议，都可以简单地从以下几个方面是否运用适当甚至是活用来判断（以上面这篇作文为例）： 1. 词(动、名、形、副、连接词等等)：fail to do sth., reveal, convey, go, motivate, perform, attain; delicious, painful, dizzy, evident, determined, fascinating, strong-minded, tough; immediately, successfully, especially, unquestionably; nevertheless, that is, from my perspective, hence 词的运用应丰富、多样，而且不能只限于动词和名词，形容词和副词的使用能增加文章的准确性和生动性；连接词的使用可以使文章结构严谨、自然流畅、富有节奏。 2. 短语：set about doing, fall off the tree, bump into the ground, lose heart, raise one’s spirits, be supposed to, reach one’s goals, contribute to(促成)，overcome the obstacles ahead, chase one’s dreams, perform better in study 请尽量使用高中学的短语！初中学的短语相对比较浅显，不足以成为亮点。 3. 句式：wi