张一模写作分析课新.ppt

organization and responsibility play very important roles in effective group working. 2. Supporting paragraph: Paragraph 2: a specific group working experience Tip 3: Describe experience in details using the past tense. Tip 4: Experience should be supportive and related to the theme. Have a try: Put the following sentence back to 2nd para. Group working has been widely accepted as an effective form of learning. From my perspective, organization and cooperation play very important roles in group working, which promote efficient learning and individual potential development. Tip 7: Proper using of adv. makes our writing coherent/ consistent(连贯的） Take my experience as an example. ① we were given a quite complicated physics problem by our teacher and were expected to work it out whatever the way was. ② , everyone in the class was eager to be the first one to solve it. Considering I was good at identifying physics principles and my friend, Joe, was better at doing complex calculations, we decided to work together . ③ , we solved it ④ and were even better than the top students who chose to work alone. ⑤ always keep in mind that cooperation and organization not only contribute to greater work efficiency but also exploring our potential. 在教室美化中，作为班长的你选择了 “ There are hopes and opportunities in life’s setbacks.”作为班训。请根据你的理解，结合自己的经历或伟人的例子，用英语写一篇100-120词的短文，阐明你选择的理由。 注意：1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. setbacks n. 挫折 “ There are hopes and opportunities in life’s setbacks.” I choose it to be our class motto. ____________________________________________________________________________ My dear friend, life is unpredictable. Disasters can strike at any time. Whatever setbacks you are faced with, be strong and positive, believing that misfortune will turn out to be fortune, on which new hopes will arise. And hope is the ship in the sea waves, carrying us to the shore of success. My dear fr