英语作文 林书豪.ppt

* 【写作任务】 某英文篮球杂志推出“一期一健将”栏目，请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，为该栏目投稿。 抢球时无畏，控球时无私。 特点 自幼酷爱篮球，篮球素质好，投 篮精准；就读哈佛大学时任校篮 球队队长，带队多次夺冠；毕业 后加入NBA，头五场得136分， 一度成为NBA最佳球员；首周表 现引起全美关注，在纽约刮起一 股“林来疯”(Linsanity)。 简介 1988年8月23日，美国 出生 林书豪(Jeremy Shu-How Lin) 姓名 What is known to us all is that Jeremy Shu-How Lin, an excellent Chinese-American basketball NBA player, was popular with us ,and I admire him so much. Lin,born on August 23rd, 1988 in America, was crazy about playing basketball as early as his childhood, and he showed a great gift for the game with exact shooting all the time.While studying in Harvard University, he was elected captain of the school basketball team, which he led to many championships. After graduating from the university, he joined the NBA, in which he gained 136 points in the first 5 matches, becoming one of the best players in the history of the NBA. His excellent performance in the first week caught the attention of the people in the United States, raising a storm of Linsanity in New York. What impressed people most was that he was very brave and selfless while playing basketball, which, in my opinion, helped him win not only the games but also the fame. 【写作分析与指导】 第一步：审题 属于介绍人物的写作，全文要以第三人称为主。动词时态以一般过去时和一般现在时态为主。 第二步：列提纲 一.总体介绍人物：林书豪，美籍华人，篮球健将； 二.以时间或时间为顺序介绍人物 1)于1988年8月23日生于美国； 自幼酷爱篮球，篮球素质好，投篮精准； 2) 就读哈佛大学时任校篮球队队长，带队多次夺冠； 3) 毕业后加入NBA，头五场得136分，一 度成为NBA最佳球员； 4) 首周表现引起全美关注，在纽约刮起一股“林来疯” (Linsanity)。 三.综合评价人物：他的运动精神(无畏、无私)，帮助他赢得比赛和荣誉。 第三步：优化句子 1. 林书豪，美籍华人，篮球健将，于1988年8月23日生于美国。 Jeremy Shu-How Lin was born on August 23rd, 1988 in America and now he is a Chinese-American basketball player. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 (改为含有同位语的一个长句) Jeremy Shu-How Lin, a Chinese-American basketball player, was born on August 23rd, 1988 in America. 2. 就读哈佛大学时任校篮球队队长，带队多次夺冠。 He was elected captain of the school basketball team when he was studying in Harvard University and he led his team