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8.近义词的误用 The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform. I quarreled with my teacher about my grades. 9.基本词汇拼写错误 I flied to New York directly from Beijing. This will be done immediatly. 10.前后人称不一致 The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard. We watched a few movies and we loved it. 11.动词原形作主语/宾语 Take a walk after dinner is very good for you. At that moment, I didnt feel like take a walk. 12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致 Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. Walking in the street, a car hit an old man. 13.一个简单句出现两个谓语 There was no work to do, he went back home. I received your email, I was very excited. being ∧ When ∧ and 14.中式英语 Next week have a party. I sorry you I cant with you go Beijing. 有则改之，无则加勉； 用心则易，无心则难。 专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应 他是个好人。 第一反应测试： He is a good man. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, easy-going, devoted, open-minded, modest, friendly… 对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。 I’m sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you. Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I can’t make it to Beijing with you as we have planned? I sorry you I can’t with you go Beijing. 存点钱是很重要的。 There is no denying/ It is beyond any dispute that depositing some money in the bank is crucial. Sometimes, whether you have money at hand means the difference of life or death for a loved one. 专题四：打动人心的句型 和 打翻人胃的句型 审题： “十年后的我” --- “感性的、充满想象的” 切忌：套用了太多所谓的“万能句式” ，破坏了这种“感性”，使之变得“太理性”、“太刚”了： （1）运用了大量的表示顺序的词句(太过理性)： Firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally; To start with；Last but not least; My future life is as follows. 审题： “十年后的我” --- “感性的、充满想象的” 切忌：套用了太多所谓的“万能句式” ，破坏了这种“感性”，使之变得“太理性”、“太刚”了： （1）运用了大量的表示顺序的词句(太过理性)： Firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally; To start with；Last but not least; My future life is as follows. （2）运用了大量的表达强烈观点句式（语气太刚）： I hold the point of view that There is no doubt that … I strongly believe that …