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* * 写作：构思→草稿→修改→誊写 重点何在？离题万里不行。确定中心就是谋篇。如何组织？没有章法不行。合理展开、结束全文即是布局。用何语言？凭空想像不行。用书面语的结构和词语乃是遣词。如何增色？平淡无奇不行。运用至少５个以上好的句型，分布在首段和尾段，此乃造句。首段和尾段要精心策划，打扮成龙头和凤尾。段落之间的转换务必自然。这四步构思都要先在草稿上完成。打草稿时间在10分钟左右，绝对值得。 写作：构思→草稿→修改→誊写 图表作文，定位→具体→解释→观点 议论文，“龙头→猪肚→凤尾” 若遇到类似merits demerits of…类型的，应侧重某一面，但绝对要考虑到另一面。若遇到idol or hero之类的大词，在按照作文所要求的三点基础上，能以全新的角度切入是最好不过了。名言/设问开头和结尾比较可取。还要小心别抄错题目，书写务必规范，尽量美观整洁。  Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in government also. They lead other people country, and make out plans. There are many scientist also. They event new things to improve our life. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, women’s position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. We also should realize, women’ likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. I’m sure, the liberation of women would be increased. 评语：基本切题。但表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 30  Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.  With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and shar