2015广东高考英语茂名二模写作积累19概要1.ppt

We have to burn our bridges before we succeed. 背水一战，势必成功！ 谁抓住救命稻草，谁就胜利！ The passage mainly tells us that a boy failed in his subjects.When the boy suffered from many defeats,he wrote himself as a loser in cartoons,and he finally succeeded,which teaches us that... Basic writing: 审题：介绍足球教材； 时态：将来时，一般现在时 句子化：1）目的，主语 谓语 宾语 时间（为了促进…人民教育出版社 发行首部教材… 今年秋季） 2）（这部教材）被… 使用，由 …编写 3) (这部教材）讲授… ，培养… 4）最新技术被使用，如每页的二维码，3D 5）学生扫描 …，观看…用智能手机 good samples 1. To promote the development of campus football in China, the first series of football textbooks, which are written by a number of football experts, coaches and sports teachers, will be published by the People’s Education Press this autumn. 2. The textbooks written by football experts, coaches and PE teachers are suitable for primary students from Grade 3 to six as well as junior and senior middle school students. 3. Not only do the textbooks teach some basic skills and rules, but also develop the students awareness of duty and team spirit. C、存在问题： 1.词汇量少，单词拼写错误严重。 2.句子成分混乱，主谓宾不分，中文式表达。 3.语法结构不扎实，乱用定语从句。 4.合并句子方法不熟练，不能按规定用5个句子完成。 5.书写潦草，不规范 D、应对策略： 1. 抓好书写。 2. 强调学生熟练掌握五种简单句基本句型，基础好的同学要注意句子的整合。 3．鼓励学生懂一句写一句，写少也比空白好。 4．落实常写作的黑体词汇。 5．多背好词好句和典型的作文，特别是作文的模板。 With the aim of promoting the development of campus football in China, the People’s Education Press is scheduled to publish the first series of football textbooks this autumn. Written by football experts, coacheds and PE teachers, the textbooks are designed for primary school students from grade three to six as well as junior and senior middle school students. Apart from teaching basic skills and rules, the textbooks will also foster team spirit and sense of responsibility. The latest technologies such as 3D pictures and QR codes have been added to each page of the textbooks to better illustrate the football skills. By scanning the QR codes, students can view educatioal videos on their smart phones. 6、读写任务（平均分9.9） A、好句子（3句）： 1、I do think highly of the measure