便条(假如你是李华,星期天和李明同学去敬老院).ppt

假设你是李华，星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动，你去找他，但他没有在家，你给他留言说明要求，内容如下：(1) 9：30在学校门口集合; (2)带劳动工具(洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等); (3)自带午饭，骑自行车前往。 注意：(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 英文便条写作指导 【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活化的原则。 应注意下面几点： (1) 注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明(第二人称)写便条 。 (2)注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时; (3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。 提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开门见山。 Dear Li Ming, This afternoon , I dropped on you , but ________ you weren’t at home . _________ , I had to leave a ________ to you. In order to show our __________ for the _________ at the nursing home as well as ________ our helping hands , this Sunday well __________________ the nursing home and try our unluckily Therefore message respect elderly offer pay a visit to try our ________ to do some voluntary _________ . As planned ( ________ ）, we are __________to ______ __________ at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and ______out by bike. So you should take your bike and dont forget to take some ________ _______ , ______ _______ best labour scheduled expected gather together start washing powder hair dressing tools and ________ tools so that we can help the ______ ______ wash clothes, cut their hair and get rid of some weeds in the garden. __________ , remember to prepare your own ______ lunch because well stay there __________ the afternoon. weeding senior citizens Additionally packed until If you come back, please ________ me at your ___________ . Li Hua ? contact convenience Dear Li Ming, This Sunday well go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, well meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow mornin