20160527县教研概要写作 陈奕蓓.pptx

Traffic jam;What’s the writing style of this passage?;Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 ;Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 ;Structure of “Problem-Solution” Passage;Paragraph 1: problem;At present, traffic jam has become a major problem which most city dwellers have to face.;;concise, coherent, correct, complete;Paragraph 3: reasons;Paragraph 4: solutions;Paragraph 4: solutions;It can be properly settled ________________________ _____________________________________________.; 内容: 思维: 语言： 书写：;Nowadays traffic jam ….. Because …… release … affect… become a danger…. Actually …… result in the traffic jam. There is no doubt that it’s vital to take measures…;leads to ; Nowadays citizens have to confront the traffic jam, which leads to emission of waste gases, affects the efficiency of work and threatens people’s lives. Actually, it is the private cars that result in the traffic jams. Beyond doubt, government should invest more on public transportation system and limit the use of private cars. (54 words); Traffic jam, a major current unavoidable problem for citizens, is caused by increasing vehicles, especially private cars. Too many vehicles cause traffic jams, even air pollution and other many problems like road accidents. To give a fundamental solution, it is vital to reduce the booming number of private cars, which people own them for various reasons depending on the concepts in different parts of the present world. Besides, relevant laws should be made and concrete measures be taken to limit the number of private cars. (84 words); Traffic jam, a major current unavoidable problem for citizens, is caused by increasing vehicles, especially private cars. Too many vehicles cause traffic jams, even air pollution and other many problems like road accidents. To give a fundamental solution, it is vital to reduce the booming number of private cars. Besides, relevant laws should be made and concrete measures be taken to limit the number of private cars.(67words) ;Homewo