Astronomy the science of the stars课件13.pptVIP

* * 必修3 Astronomy: the science of the stars Unit 4 【写作任务】 假设你是陈辉，近来感到很苦恼：你对到火星旅行很感兴趣，经常到网上查看最新的新闻和视频，并且和有相同爱好的人网聊，还经常到图书馆查阅相关资料，但是你的父母对此很不理解，以致你们近来相处不好。现在请你给你的美国好友Tom写一封信，表示希望得到他的建议和帮助。 注意： 1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数：100左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Chen Hui 一、审题：确定短文体裁、人称和时态 该书面表达任务是给自己的美国好友写一 封信，属于应用文范畴；此处主要介绍自己当前遇到的问题，故人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。 二、确定文章结构 根据要点提示，此书面表达可分为三段。 第一段：说明写信的目的——求助； 第二段：详细说明自己遇到的问题和苦恼； 第三段：表示希望得到帮助和早日回复。 【写作步骤】 三、词语储备 1. 一个棘手的问题 2. 处理；解决 3. 对……着迷；热衷于…… 4. 此外，而且 5. 在……看来 6. 对……有好处 7. 强烈反对 8. 浪费时间 9. 与……相处 10. 盼望；期待　　 　　　　　　 　　　 a tough problem deal with be crazy about in addition in one’s opinion be beneficial to be strongly against a waste of time get along with look forward to 四、备用句型罗列 1. I’m writing to tell you about a tough problem. 2. I don’t know how to deal with it and need your help. 3. I’m crazy about traveling to Mars. 4. I spend lots of time looking for the latest news and videos on the Internet. 5. I often have a chat with some friends who have the same interest on the Internet. 6. My parents are strongly against it and they think that it’s a waste of time. 7. I don’t get along well with them. 8. Can you offer me some suggestions? 9. I’m looking forward to your early reply.　　 　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　 　　　 【学生习作】 Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you about a tough problem. I don’t know how to deal with it and need your help. As you know, I’m crazy about traveling to Mars. So I spend lots of time looking for the latest news and videos on the Internet. And I often have a chat with some friends who have the same interest on the Internet. In addition, to find relevant something① to read, I often go to the library. In my opinion, this hobby is beneficial to me. However, my parents are strongly against it. They think that it’s a waste of time②. Thus, I don’t get along well with