英语四六级作文之相关.pdf

英语四、六级作文之相关 高分作文标志: （网上资料整理） 1：是否长短句交叉；2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师 眼球的闪光词； 4 、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用 we / I ( 比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾 2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后， 两边分别加上逗号。 如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上 逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等) 比如上面例子中，applicable 替换proper, approaches 替换ways, implement 替换carry out, sharpen one ’s competitive edge 替换 enhance one ’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 替换表： 1.individuals,characters, folks 替换 people ,persons 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换 bad 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 替换 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换 many. 注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several 替换 some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替 think ( 因为是书面语，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换 more and more( 注意没有 growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用 increasingly. 12.little if anything, 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly 13..beneficial, rewa