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智 课 网 G R E 备 考 资 料 GRE考试高分作文推荐与赏析 作文高分是很多同学复习GRE考试的目标，他们希望自己能在作文 上拿到不错的GRE分数。但是写作高分对考生的要求是比较高的，GRE 写作满分要求更高。智课小编下面给大家分享的是作文的范文，一起来 看一下吧： The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time. The speaker contends that technologys primary goal should be to increase our efficiency for the purpose of affording us more leisure time. I concede that technology has enhanced our efficiency as we go about our everyday lives. Productivity software helps us plan and coordinate projects; intranets, the Internet, and satellite technology make us more efficient messengers; and technology even helps us prepare our food and access entertainment more efficiently. Beyond this concession, however, I find the speakers contention indefensible from both an empirical and a normative standpoint. 注意这种新结构：运用了大量的事实作出对GRE考试原文观点的让 步性同意，但是在最后还是有所创新的提出自己的读到见解。这种开头 给人一种很爽的感觉——have forcibly posed your viewpoints.让我们记住：The speaker contends that……I concede that……Beyond this concession, however, I find the speakers contention indefensible from both an empirical and a normative standpoint. The chief reason for my disagreement lies in the empirical proof: with technological advancement comes diminished leisure time. In 1960 the average U.S. family included only one breadwinner, who worked just over 40 hours per week. Since then the average work week has increased steadily to nearly 60 hours today; and in most families there are now two breadwinners. What explains this decline in leisure despite increasing efficiency that new technologies have brought about? I contend that technology itself is the culprit behind the decline. We use the additional free time that technology affords us not for leisure but rather for work. As computer technology enables greater and greater office productivity it also raises our employers expectations——or demands——for prod