TEM82011年翻译部分讲解题库.pptVIP

以上学生译文（1）Hasty and leisurely属主语词性形态错误，类似的形态错误的译文还有：Busy and free，Busy and freedom，Business and leisurely，Being leisure or haste，Hurryness and leisure，Rushes and leisureness等等。译文（2）Haste and leisure is，属谓语动词形态错误，因为Haste and leisure 是复数概念，应该使用are。译文（3）Haste or leisure is，也属谓语动词形态错误，因为后面的two completely different lifestyles是复数概念，也应该使用are。译文（4）中 complete different lifestyles，complete 修饰的是different，因此应该改为completely different lifestyles。译文（5）中complete differently lifestyles， complete 修饰的是differently，differently 修饰的是lifestyles，因此也应该改为completely different lifestyles。译文（6）Haste and leisure are two completely different lifestyle. 主语Haste and leisure，谓语动词are和two都是复数概念，因此宾语lifestyle应该使用复数lifestyles。 句[2]学生译文（1）：But in reality, person now tend to be in a frequent hurry among the two lifestyles, and sometimes even themselves couldn’t tell whether he is at leisure or in a hurry. (2分样卷) 以上译文出自一份2分样卷，形态上错误很多，主要是数（number）、格（case）的问题。人们应该用people ,而不是person。 “两种（生活方式）间”应该是between..., 而不是among ...。原文“有时也说不清自己到底是‘休闲着’还是‘匆忙着’”，译文主语是they, 是themselves；whether he is应改为whether they are。试比较： cf. But in reality, people now tend to be in a frequent hurry between the two lifestyles, and sometimes even they couldn’t tell whether they are at leisure or in a hurry. 句[3]学生译文(1)：For example, we may receipt a phone call from our work or our clients. But at the very moment, we are enjoying our vacation in the sites of tourist interesting. In this case, the modern, convenience and advance tool demonstrates its ferocious and gloom aspect, spoiling the cheer mood of us. The restness of the vacation is unlike to live up to its name because of anxious troubling us. 以上译文主要错误是“词性”（parts of speech）问题。试比较修改后的划线部分： cf. For example, we may receive a phone call from our work or our clients. But at the very moment, we are enjoying our vacation in the sites of tourist interest. In this case, the modern, convenient and advanced tool demonstrates its ferocious and gloomy aspect, spoiling the cheerful mood o