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2017年5月6日 雅思国内大作文思路分析及范文 原题：Young people who commit serious crimes (violent attack or robbery) should be punished in the same way as adults.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 题目翻译：犯了严重罪行（暴力袭击或抢劫）的年轻人应该像成年人用同样的方式惩罚。请问你同意不同意？ 思路分析：本题上一次出现在2015年4月25日。有别于一般的犯罪类话题要求分析原因和解决方案等（延长监禁时间、进行教育等），这道题在审题的时候需要大家对题目中的几个关键词young people、serious crimes、in the same way as adults进行思考。是不是要和成年人人一样对犯罪的行为用同样的方法审判，我们需要考虑到年轻人的年龄特殊阶段和思想不成熟性；我们也要想到这样做的严重后果，既考虑到对年轻人的影响也有对社会的影响。 当然，完全不惩罚也是不行的，我们也可以从这方面进行思考， 本资料由牛学教育原创分享 P1：In many parts of the world, serious juvenile delinquency, such as robbery or violent attack, frequently appears as the headline in newspaper or TV programs. Some, therefore, insist that to deter it these young offenders should be penalized in regular court as adult criminals. However, I totally disagree with this proposal. 第一段翻译：在世界许多地方，严重的青少年犯罪，如抢劫或暴力袭击，经常出现在报纸或电视上成为头条报道。因此，有些人坚持认为这些年轻的罪犯应该在普通法院作为成年罪犯受到惩罚。然而我完全不同意这个建议。 P2：There are several sound reasons why these non-grown-ups should be judged differently. Firstly, they are mentally immature so that they cannot tell right from wrong. When committing serious crimes, they deem these acts as cool, being unaware that they are breaking the law. However, these adult criminals, in most cases, are capable of judging their activities and therefore should be completely responsible for their deeds. Secondly, this may pose more serious problems to these young people and society. Giving these young a heavier sentence means that they lose the chance to receive education and learn workable skills as their peers do. Thus, when released from prison years later, they may become unemployed and commit crimes again. 第二段翻译：非成年人的审判应该和成年犯区别开来是有一些非常有道理的理由。首先，他们在心智上是不成熟的，所以他们不能分辨对与错。当犯下严重罪行时，他们认为这些行为很酷，不知道他们触犯了法律。他们不像那些成年犯罪分子，那些人在多数情况下是有能力判断自己的行为也因此应该为自己的行为负责。其次，这有可能对这些年轻人和社会带来更严重的问题。给他们一个更重的审判意味着这些年轻人失去接受教育和学习工作技能的机会。这样等到多年后从监狱中出来后，他们有可能失业、继续犯罪。 本资料由牛学教育原创分享 P3：However, these convincing arguments in trying them differently than adults c