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叙事技法点滴 1.平铺直叙 一场交通事故 【内容提示】 根据下面的素材写一篇短文，记叙一场交通事故的前前后后： ①一天晚上，Lee先生开车带着他的妻子下班回家。他的妻子是一家医院的 护士。快到午夜了，她十分困乏，很快就睡着了。Lee先生看看她，笑了。 ②Lee先生驾车很有经验，也很谨慎。开车走了一会儿，他注意到有一辆车 在他后边，车开得很快，超过他的车。 ③驾驶那辆车的人很慌张，没有看见迎头开过来的卡车。为了避免撞车，他 突然让自己的车转弯，车滑向路的一侧撞到一棵大树上。司机和乘客都受伤了。 ④Lee先生急忙把车停在路旁，他的妻子也从车里出来帮助受伤的人。卡车 司机也停下来帮忙。Lee先生驱车去给警察打电话。 ⑤大约20分钟后，一辆警察车和一辆救护车到了。人们把伤员抬到救护车 上送往医院。 ⑥警察记录事故的详细情况，Lee先生和卡车司机把他们知道的情况都告诉 了警察。警察感谢他们的帮助。Lee先生和妻子乘上自己的车继续赶路回家。 【作文示范】 A Traffic Accident 光心因 One night Mr Lee was driving his wife home from work. She was a nurse in a hospital. It was almost midnight and she was quite tired out. She soon fell asleep. Mr Lee looked at her and smiled. Mr Lee was a careful and experienced driver. He knew it was safer to drive slowly on a dark night. After some time he noticed a car following him. It was travelling very fast. Suddenly it overtook① his car. The driver of the car was in a hurry. He did not see the approaching lorry. To avoid hitting it, he suddenly tuned his car. It skidded② off the road and hit a big tree. The driver and his passenger were ③ ④ injured .They were badly cut by glass from the broken windscreen . Mr Lee quickly stopped his car by the side of the road. His wife got out of the car to help the injured. The lorry driver also stopped to help. Mr Lee drove off to telephone the police . About twenty-five minutes later, a police car and an ambulance⑤ arrived. The injured were carried into the ambulance and taken to hospital. The policemen took down details of the accident. Mr Lee and the lorry driver told them all they could remember. The policemen thanked them for their help. Mr and Mrs Lee got into their car a